Rubik your mind road to your light
short description
Inspired by 6 colors in NBC logo reminding the the rubik with 6 sides of color
The rubik becomes a symbol of creative spirit
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  • Maureen Murtha May 16, 2017, 9:19 a.m. PDT
    Hello, and thanks for your submission!

    Here is my initial feedback on this design:

    Balance - This is image is very well-balanced, with the minor exception of the logos and text being unevenly offset on their respective sides. Otherwise, good work!

    Contrast - The central cube contrasts nicely from the repeated background image. However, the multi-colored hands -- while much more vibrant colors -- are tuned closer to the tone of the background. I believe the image would be stronger
    if the hand colors had deeper saturation, and perhaps more "hand" definition.

    Emphasis - Your focal point of the cube is heavily emphasized -- for the most part it's appropriate, but see comments above as to how it actually takes attention away from some of the more interesting parts of the image. Consider scaling back that emphasis.

    Movement - This image has strong movement, especially with the background. It didn't take long at all for me to see the majority of details, including the logos and the repeating background/foreground image. Good work!

    Pattern - Interesting use of pattern, but I recommend you re-evaluate the choice of circles as the repeating shape. This image could be very interesting with a different shape.

    Rhythm - Aside from the awkwardly placed logos and text, the rhythm is relatively strong and well-utilized. Good work.

    Unity/variety - This image has strong unity without losing out on variety. Good work.
    • Lục Song Tư May 16, 2017, 5:27 p.m. PDT
      Thank you so much for feedback, I will try to adjust according to your comments